It was a dark stormy night. Thunder shaking the wooden house, and lightening brightening up the sky. George and Kyle are home all alone and are as scared as ever. To get things off there minds George has an idea.
"Let's play 20 questions," George screeches.
"I don't think that's a very good idea George," Kyle manages to say while turning on his flashlight.
"But Kyle it's better than sitting here and having to be silent," exclaims George.
"Well if we're silent whoever's out there can't hear us," Kyle says under his breath.
Angry, George drops his flashlight, and it hits the floor with a kaboom. Kyle rushes to the scene and yells, "Good one dummy, now we defiantly blew our cover."
Persistently, George whips his head around and says, "Well now can we play?"
"Sure...Sure. I guess so. You start." Kyle shouts in a "whatever" kind of tone.
"Yes, okay. What is your all-time favorite movie?"
"That's a tough one. Probably..Umm..."
This went on until the boys parents finally came home, and told the boys they had hung some clothing on the line and it looked like someone was standing out there. In relief, the boys went right to bed, still a little timid to sleep with both eyes closed.
The dark and stormy night is tad bit cliche :P
ReplyDeleteVery nice dialogue. I like the setting!
This is a great post. I really enjoyed reading it and think that it was realistic and was easy to picture what was going on!! great job soph
ReplyDeleteI really like how you were descriptive instead of adding "he said" at the end of each speaking part. I could easily picture the scene in my head.
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