Fancy girls, suit and tie men, raggedy clothed street cleaners,
students, tired drunkards, and thief's,
Every one as pleasant and humble as could be;
Interweaving amoung each other,
in this big and blaring car. I hear the sound of
moving doors click-clacking together between
each stop. The loudness of the train almost makes everything seem more silent.
Many passengers await their destination,
yet everything is so quiet.
As the train thunders through the night
everything seems to be even more bright.
Yet the train is still lingering loudly with excite,
and the fancy girls, suit and tie men, raggedy clothed street cleaners,
students, tired drunkards, and thief's,
all still await on the train hoping to catch their dreams.
Alliteration: big and blaring
Consonace: click-clacking
End Rhyme: The loudness of the train almost makes everything seem more silent.
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As the train thunders through the night
everything seems to be even more bright.
Yet the train is still lingering loudly with excite,
Many passengers await their destination,
yet everything is so quiet.
Personification: train thunders through the night
Caesura: are highlighted
Working Times:
Monday, 2/10- 15 minutes, "This is your brain on Music"
Tuesday, 2/11- 20 minutes, "This is your brain on Music"
Wednesday, 2/12- 15 minutes, "This is your brain on Music"
Thursday, 2/13- 15 minutes, "This is your brain on Music"
Friday, 2/14 20 minutes, "This is your brain on Music"
Saturday, 2/15- 20 minutes, "This is your brain on Music"
Sunday, 2/16 20 minutes annotating lyrics
Total- This is your brain on Music: pg. 38
125 minutes
soph this poem was great. I can tell you really tried and your tool identifications were good. Great job and keep up the good posts!
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